1. A night so total scan where we may eyes open or blind: Nothing, no Outside. Soon we'll forget the things and what they meant and the nouns they went by. Only our dreams buried inside us shining like day. 2. But the listening world was tuneful and true, the bow-wave shlshhhd, a knife through meringue, somebody sneezed, a lissome achoo, a creak, a clatter, a footstep... and then a human voice was heard. 3. Our Captain quizzing his crew if a light he saw or imagined blinking abaft, was one of us striking a match, or, say, an ember of Venus vanishing Westward. No one stepped forward and said what he knew with seamanlike alacrity. 4. In the timeless ensuing silences we seem to sense whispering choruses, voices voluble, full of detail.
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Such a dreamy poem- it feels like Fall when everything is transitioning.
So much is good here. This, in particular, got to me: "Soon we'll forget the things and what they meant and the nouns they went by."