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janine fay's avatar

Better than using words that maim 💜

Kazumi's avatar

This slows me down and provides calm observing state. Magic of your words!

Sharon Watts's avatar

I would say "ON a train, say," because I left a place where I stood IN line to the place were I stand ON line. But I do share that "parallelogram"—tilted while moving—and I read footnotes.

I like this poem a lot, Father of Sam.